Review for LF2 - Julian War Ch6 P1
Graphics: 7/10
Animation: 7/10
Sound Effects: 7/10
Voice-overs: -/10
Music: 9/10
Plot: 8/10
Overall: 7/10
Right ok, like always first up is graphics. At first I thought this was going to be an 8-bit graphic movie, however you surprised me with your actually well designed animation. The reason you pulled a 7 out of ten on this one, is because of some minor things, such as the minor attacks, and the bookshelves were very out of place (their drawing was much different than everything else). Next is animation. Done in an 8-bit style, which would have scored higher if this was actually 8-bit, also, during the fight scene, the black masked fellow did the same punching combo about three times. 7/10 for sound effects, since sound effects were only used during the fight scene, and were the same cliched punching sounds, with some interesting laser sounds. I had a hard time deciding your score for music. I kept switching from 8 to 9 then back to 8, finally deciding a nine would fit nicely, since the music fit well, but you definitely should have use a few more tracks for the different scenes. Plot would have gotten a 10/10 since I came into this series far to late to really judge on a part of a full episode, however some grammatical mistakes in some of the lines is what took away those points. Overall, not bad, some improvement needed in the english department, and some new sound packs, and you'll be in business.
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